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Critique my hip hop lyrics?

Rate is more uptempo ie, Black Eyed Peas … here goes … I can not wait for the pace, only the drop, like Rob Base, now I want to rock, like the shirt you bought at Hot Topic, I kick rhymes, others may steal, so I guess is theft, bet this album spins like a roulette wheel, which long days working as a U.S. label, now I'm in 7th Heaven as Jessica Biel, because the hard parts done, now I can get my head out of the midnight sun, My wife thinks this is a trick of half-life, back to watchin 'Drake at 101, is the Return of the drama, out Chunkin 'deuces as the Dalai Lama, I am a guru Mar, my flow on You Tube, My next move? Depends on what you do! Thoughts?

the first 8 bars are excellent, while the last 8 bars f @ cking suck. the first 8 bars actually made sense and were actually very clever, as it seems who hurried to finish the last 8 to complete a conventional 16-bar verses. that have potential. Study how Eminem, Mos Def, and even people like DMX and rhyme Cameron. We often combine two words and rhyme together but in a way that does not harm the meaning of the lyrics. This combination is called Multis. EX. hat, test, fly cat, eyes flat. Also, if you can without damaging the meaning of the lyrics, the internal use of rhyme. The study also Immortal Technique and how to induce the sense in his lyrics. To advance rhyme (because I still do not know how to rhyme words) Del Funkee Homoosapien study, Kool Keith and Blackalicous and see how the rhyme. Judging by his lyrics songs that were influenced by Lil Wayne, with some phrases. It is good to some extent but not overuse type of delivery. If your about my age, 17 years, do not quit your daily work, but if its at least 1-4 years younger than me, experimenting with different patterns of rhyme, lyricist further study to improve in his rhyme, and do other things will improve delivery, flow and freestyle. Hope this helps